Midnight's kids

موضوع: Midnight's kids الأحد فبراير 01, 2009 5:32 am

This is a story I wrote 2 years ago

I'd like to show it to you

what do you think about it

I know it should has many mistakes

Midnight's kids

It happened once when John was walking alone in the city at midnight where all people were sleeping. John was trying to find a friend of him who promised him to meet near the biggest super market in the city close to his house to give him something that his parents prohibited him from taking it out house .While John was walking towards the supermarket ,two thieves, who were planning to steal the supermarket, saw him. They caught him and tight him well in order not to disturb them. At that moment John’s brave friend appeared and helped him and they both run away to the police centre and told them about the robbery. The police harried there and caught the thieves. The two little boys were rewarded by the police but then they were punished a strong punishment by their parents. Although their intention was innocent , yet they were wrong in their behaviour. Every one should follow his parents orders because they are the people who know what is good and what is bad for them. We should always remember that going out at night is something very dangerous, one doesn’t know what may happen to him there.

waiting 4 your opinions

موضوع: رد: Midnight's kids الخميس فبراير 05, 2009 5:38 pm

thanks it is very nice story
Iwill tell it to my kids this nightانشاء الله

موضوع: رد: Midnight's kids الجمعة فبراير 06, 2009 5:10 am

so glad to see you here honey

thanks for passing

موضوع: رد: Midnight's kids الجمعة فبراير 13, 2009 12:39 am

Really, it is so GR8.